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Elite Marine 05-09-2008 08:32 PM

Which Logo
 
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I designed this simple logo for letterhead, shirts etc...I decided I want to add to it to make it look more "in motion". Which of the 5 do you think looks best?

fountainguy214 05-09-2008 08:34 PM

pics???

McGary911 05-09-2008 08:59 PM

I kind of like 5 the best. looks cleanest. I voted for 4 tho, as 5 doesn't have your "motion wake line things" in any form. I think it looks most balanced without the lines.

berns29scarab 05-09-2008 11:00 PM

i agree.. the bottom one #5

Indy 05-10-2008 07:56 AM

No question #5, those "motion" marks at the back of the boat are distracting and detract from the overall logo.

Elite Marine 05-10-2008 10:28 AM

You guys got something going with my wife...she said the same things!

bor 05-10-2008 10:36 AM

hee kirk,

sorry to say but your wife is right!!

MacGyver 05-10-2008 10:52 AM

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Maybe this?

Shanghied Again 05-10-2008 01:09 PM

Number 5 looks good the problem is with the others you never want to make one side different then the other looks odd.

rainmn 05-10-2008 01:22 PM

Your wife and all the others are right....# 5 is the winner.

Elite Marine 05-10-2008 06:50 PM

OK - Done, plain and simple.

Thanks. I didnt expect this many people to vote!!

groundsfordivorce 05-10-2008 09:59 PM

5 is the best but it sucks when the wife is right and you have to tell her

Playn 05-10-2008 10:02 PM

3 looks more in motion but 5 looks the best (IMHO)

mwdill 05-11-2008 11:44 AM

5, looks cleaner

jayboat 05-11-2008 12:49 PM

I vote for number 6... 8-]
 
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Here's my .02.:drink:

Lose the 'Inc' - the only people who care about that are your creditors- just adds visual clutter.

Italicizing the name gives it a feeling of motion.

Find another typeface for your secondary copy- cataneo swash is an inappropriate choice. (my opinion anyway- doesn't mix at all with the Kabel Bold)

One reason your motion marks didn't work is they are incongruent with the rest of the image. Instead of straight, blocky rectangles try using smooth swashes that harmonize with the type of line you are using with the boat graphic. (I would show ya, but I've used up my two cents worth...)

Sunnydays 05-11-2008 01:37 PM

You have a winner!!!

45sonic 05-11-2008 03:37 PM

#5

Ona-Mission 05-11-2008 08:09 PM

5 is the only way to go. Awsome logo

Perlmudder 05-11-2008 10:40 PM

i like 5 best also. the one jay boat did looks good. nice and smooth, i think it gives it a feeling of speed also.

BigDaddyM 05-11-2008 10:45 PM

Definitely 5. Definitely.

Elite Marine 05-11-2008 10:49 PM

Besides the hot chick in your avatar, I like your suggestions alot.

I like the logo you made too. Email me:

[email protected]

I'd like to work something out to have you send me it in formats that will allow my screen printer to make shirts and stuff.

I dont need the motion marks, as your design is much more appealing. You have made the permanent discount list for sure!!

Thanks,

Kiri

getchasum111 05-12-2008 08:34 AM

I think jayboat is on the money....


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