Or better yet open check book NO pictures!

http://www.offshoreonly.com/classifi...ng-o62366.html

Many good points, so please critique this. (gently. )
http://www.powerboatlistings.com/view/26564

What pics should I ad? or is it OK.

Ok here goes... Lose the dishwasher seas add big water. After the personal and famimy reasons add (attracts so many skanks im now having marital problems) lose the name brand boat crap as basically youre telling themto buy another boat like a cig or apache... More close up pics of hot skanks in string bikinis, also u might want to throw in A pic of a skank going down on you at party cove to earn a ride on that badboy! Good luck with the sale, rm

Put un a pic of the check book and mention you not only used that particular check book to maintain the boat but also used it to buy huge cans for several skanks...

Its always a good idea to have a hot skank with a big smile and huge set of cans about falling out of her top bending over the engines... Rm

Your text is trying hard to sell the boat!

Pics are decent, not professional (lighting and clarity) but honest and show what I would want to see in an ad. If I was a buyer, I would like to see a photo of the engine bay looking down onto a shiny bilge floor. Just me being picky.
If you have a trailer, a nice photo of the boat on the trailer, side on is important.

Boat looks smart, good luck with a sale.

RR

I agree with Rak, I'd remove the two blurry motor pics and gets new cabin pics without the subs. In your write up, you have two typos (dinoed and bran). I'd also remove the phrase (new loving owner), just sounds sappy to me. Just being critical since I think that's what you're looking for. Nice boat and good luck with your sale.

Correct your spelling, add max speed, need shots of the boat from all 4 angles, engine bay, nice 3/4 shot of drives and refine your description about comparing with brands and family issues. You go too deep into the mods., gets long fast. Your going to have to price more aggressively to move it being the brand is not as well known or traded on the open market. In a nut shell, redo your ad.

Some good points coming up but hey!! Tough crowd....!!

Selling a six figure toy is different than listing a lawn mower on craigslist for sale, attention to details and correct spelling is a must. Not being tough on Paradox, just pointing out what doesn't work in the ad. Paradox was looking for some critique. Stick to facts when listing, excellent pictures, and offer the best product at an aggressive price. Price, product, condition; when all are in line that's your best chance for a sale.